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[OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis

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(2016-Jan-22, 07:36:39)ljzigerell Wrote: The manuscript is good. I have attached a file with some grammar edits and comments. I approve the manuscript after those edits are addressed.

A few notes that are not necessary to address for my approval:

1. I'm not sure it's necessary to add the Japan S-factor results, but that's at least something to consider.

2. It might be worth considering the legibility of graphs. The text on the y-axis for Figure 4 overlaps slightly; Figures 5 and 6 have labels that fall off the graph or are on top of each other; and Figures 7 and 8 have a lot of labels on top of each other. If the labels aren't necessary for Figures 7 and 8, it might be best to exclude the labels; otherwise, I'm not sure of a solution.

3. The unexpected result for female pay might reflect a positive outcome. The dataset had a gross annual pay variable that was not disaggregated by sex, so maybe that would be a better measure in the future, if it's not theoretically clear that lower pay for one sex would be a negative outcome (because of, for instance, the assortive mating that Kenya mentioned).



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[OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2015-Sep-23, 10:15:32
RE: [sociology] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by NoahCarl - 2015-Sep-23, 12:29:02
Reply to Noah #2 - by Emil - 2015-Sep-24, 00:50:35
RE: [sociology] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by NoahCarl - 2015-Sep-24, 08:36:34
RE: [sociology] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2015-Sep-25, 02:26:16
RE: [sociology] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2015-Sep-25, 13:16:21
RE: [sociology] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Kenya Kura - 2015-Sep-28, 15:01:57
RE: [sociology] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2015-Sep-30, 13:34:40
RE: [sociology] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2015-Oct-03, 18:42:54
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by ljzigerell - 2016-Jan-22, 07:36:39
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by ljzigerell - 2016-Jan-22, 14:03:05
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2016-Jan-22, 14:20:39
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2016-Jan-23, 12:23:18
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by ljzigerell - 2016-Jan-23, 18:40:01
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2016-Jan-24, 20:53:55
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2016-Mar-20, 05:59:05
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality among 32 London Boroughs: An S factor analysis - by Emil - 2016-Mar-20, 07:15:19
 
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